Audience feedback first draft

After finishing the first draft we held a session where are targetted audience was asked to give critisim to the video, this is what we gathered.

the negatives had wanted more close up shots of the musical instruments but had liked the transition of colours it was also synched to the music as seen with a wide range of shots. Audience did not undestand the chemical scene due to the long takes and was advises to revisit.

the glow sticks and typography gave it lots of colour, though the actors were motivated and energetic people would like a cross cut when we get a extreme close up of the main leaders lips since it feels as it drags on

what the majority of audience had issues with was the chemical sequence not only that it needed to be in the beat but it needed more transitions

People liked the overlay of the main leaders lip and the glow sticks and would like to see more or similar effect. There was a strong prasie to the editing technique on final cut pro as it seemed to be more polished.